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Business example: before editing

Performance of management did decreased from the previous years, not all people was satisfied with the organization and the also availability of supervision,. However the management has desided to come forward with new ideas on how to improve on there service. Basically non of the service or our requirements have changed , we still diliver the same service than always. Our knowledge have increased and we have established partnerships and proofed to be good at it.

Business example: after editing

Performance of management has decreased from the previous years; not all people were satisfied with the organisation nor the availability of supervision. However, management has decided to come forward with new ideas on how to improve their performance. Neither our service nor our requirements have changed; we still deliver the same service, as always. Our knowledge has increased while at the same time we have established partnerships, and proved to be good at maintaining these partnerships.

Academic example: before editing

This paper present a dynamic generalization of a models often used to aid in general marketing decision related to conventional products.. The model used stated preference
data on a random utility frameworks to predict adoption rates for new FMCG products. In addition, this paper employ a XYLO's model of consumer learning - While the simple learning rule presentedd here is only a rough copy of reality, this model anyway systematically incorporated important features including learning and the influence of shifting preferences on market shaare.

Academic example: after editing

This paper presents a dynamic generalisation of a model often used to aid marketing decisions relating to conventional products. The model uses stated-preference data in a random-utility framework to predict adoption rates for new FMCG products. In addition, this paper employs a XYLO model of consumer learning. While the simple learning rule presented here is only an approximation to reality, this model nevertheless systematically incorporates important features including learning and the influence of shifting preferences on market share.